Saturday, November 26, 2011

Verbal Autopsy

My brain is a scalpel dissecting words as they come across my path.
Slowly I inject my personal thoughts into your cerebral cortex.
Invading the left hemisphere like ants on a picnic blanket.
It is I who tweaks the nerves, Sending pulses of neurotic pleasures through out your being.
Rummaging through your thoughts and behavior patterns like a seagull at a trash heap.
My words give life as I seep through your veins traveling a direct route to your ventricles.
I fill you with thought.........
I am performing Verbal Autopsy

10 comments:

  1. Buddha...let me rub your belly! :)
    well spoken Jack...well said!

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  2. "Rummaging through your thoughts and behavior patterns like a seagull at a trash heap", nice I like that. : )

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  3. Thanks for viewing this one JosephAlsarraf !! I hope it was alright

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  4. very well written! I have to agree with your writing 'my words give life as i seep through your veins...' i truly 'feel' this.

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  5. Thanks Donna!!! But if they read my daily postings like you. They might run

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  6. Wow, I love this! Very cool. Thanks for the follow, Gordan.

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  7. LynNerdKelley, Thanks for reading mine too.

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  8. I have to agree, beautifully written.

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  9. Hey Peaches Thanks for reading and commenting

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